Template:Did you know nominations/Stephanie Jallen
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The result was: promoted by — Maile (talk) 14:49, 25 March 2014 (UTC)
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Stephanie Jallen
[edit]- ... that American Paralympian Stephanie Jallen hops?
- Reviewed: see below
- Comment: Please review ASAP for the Winter Paralympics
Created by Matty.007 (talk). Self nominated at 19:37, 13 March 2014 (UTC).
I've looked at this. OK, but cannot move forward without a QPQ and the article finishes unusually. I think we need to know the conclusion of the event that the article starts to talk about. Thanks. Victuallers (talk) 10:09, 14 March 2014 (UTC)- Sorry, working on it. Finishing the article can be done over the weekend I think, I know the visually impaired combined is over, but not if the standing is, I'll have a look. Thanks, Matty.007 17:57, 14 March 2014 (UTC)
- Great ... but the article still finishes with a description that ends in the middle of an event. Needs just a few words to create a conclusion of what happened. Victuallers (talk) 12:35, 16 March 2014 (UTC)
- I think its OK but the hook fact goes to her personal website. Victuallers (talk) 10:15, 23 March 2014 (UTC)
I think its important to have a nickname/description sourced from a 3rd party site although seeing it on her personal site reassures that she is happy with the name. I have found a 3rd party source and added some extra stuff about her. I'm happy with it now. Victuallers (talk) 12:47, 23 March 2014 (UTC)
