Template:Did you know nominations/Stella Bloch

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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 23:11, 4 November 2015 (UTC)

Stella Bloch

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Stella Bloch in costume

... that Stella Bloch (pictured) headlined in New York after she returned from learning Javanese dancing at the Prince of Solo's palace?

ALT1:have a go
Reviewed: qpq= CJ Olshavsky

Created by Victuallers (talk). Self-nominated at 22:57, 21 October 2015 (UTC).

Well, she was lovely.
This is really neither here nor there as to your DYK submission but you really should provide a source for her DOB and DOD, ideally in the #Life section or infobox rather than the lead. Also, kindly notice the comma fixes: it's 日日 Month 年年年年 or Month 日日, 年年年年, but not 日日 Month, 年年年年.
Also, I know this is a little odd, but Poland didn't exist in the late 19th century. Was she born in the Russian Empire, Austria-Hungary, or the German Empire? You'll need to emend the running text and the infobox. — LlywelynII 12:41, 22 October 2015 (UTC)

Eh, since I'm here anyway... Gimme a sec. — LlywelynII 07:21, 23 October 2015 (UTC)

New enough at time of submission; currently long enough (~2.9k char.); seems neutral except for the original ahistoricity/anti-Austrian bias (presently fixed); sourced well enough for a new article on a figure in the performing arts; mostly lifted from the NYPL treatment but earwig finds minimal cut-and-pasting. Hook's terse and interesting enough for gov't work; cited. QPQ checks out. Added some links to the hook for clarity but G2G. — LlywelynII 07:35, 23 October 2015 (UTC)