Template:Did you know nominations/Stealing Peaches

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:47, 6 December 2016 (UTC)

Stealing Peaches

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... that "Stealing Peaches" describes the Indian rope trick?

Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Tenable

Created by Kingoflettuce (talk). Self-nominated at 14:02, 16 November 2016 (UTC).

This is my first DYK review ever, so I would not mind a second pairs of eyes on this to make sure I'm doing this right. The article was nominated to DYK within an hour of creation, so meets the "new" criterion. Above 1500 characters, so long enough. The article and the sourcing look excellent, but I have to assume good faith, as all of them appear to either be in print or require purchase for an electronic copy. The hook is definitely short enough and appears in the article with an inline citation. QPQ requirement met. My only concern is that I think the hook could appeal to a broader audience if there was just a teensy bit more context, such as explaining what "Stealing Peaches" is (a short story). What do you think? Mz7 (talk) 05:36, 29 November 2016 (UTC)

great idea Mz7. Alt1: ... that the Pu Songling short story "Stealing Peaches" describes the Indian rope trick? Kingoflettuce (talk) 13:53, 30 November 2016 (UTC)

@Kingoflettuce: Yes, that's exactly along the lines of what I was thinking. ALT-1 looks good to go! (Note: I made a very minor copyedit: put quotation marks around "Stealing Peaches") Mz7 (talk) 20:49, 30 November 2016 (UTC)