Template:Did you know nominations/State Farm Downtown Building

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The result was: promoted by BlueMoonset (talk) 23:18, 24 October 2012 (UTC)

State Farm Downtown Building

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... that the State Farm Downtown Building (pictured) in Bloomington, Illinois features the intact 1951 office of company founder George J. Mecherle?

Reviewed: Mozambique Rain Frog

Created/expanded by IvoShandor (talk). Self nom at 01:30, 22 October 2012 (UTC)

The article is sufficiently new and of the correct length. Sources are generally well paraphrased or directly quoted, although the end of the final sentence could do with rewording "...the company sometimes uses it to educate new employees about the company's history." vs "...State Farm occasionally uses it to educate new employees about the company's history." Hook is interesting, and another article has been reviewed. Image is free and clear at small size. Once the minor rephrasing is done, this will be good to go. Warofdreams talk 13:03, 22 October 2012 (UTC)

Re-paraphrased. It should be sufficient. I knew that one would come up, guess I was in a hurry.IvoShandor (talk) 23:10, 22 October 2012 (UTC)

Great, it's now good to go. Nice work! Warofdreams talk 23:56, 22 October 2012 (UTC)