Template:Did you know nominations/Star Trek: Deep Space Nine: The Fallen

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The result was: promoted by Allen3 ^talk 09:14, 30 August 2013 (UTC)

Star Trek: Deep Space Nine: The Fallen

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... that one critic said in 2000 that the lack of multiplayer in the video game Star Trek: Deep Space Nine: The Fallen was "one of the worst game-design decisions made this year"?

5x expanded by Bertaut (talk). Nominated by Miyagawa (talk) at 21:17, 16 August 2013 (UTC).

This is a decent article - well-written, long enough, new enough and well-sourced. However, I do wonder whether the hook might be unduly negative, given that the game had good reviews. How about a more balanced alternative hook as follows? Prioryman (talk) 06:24, 28 August 2013 (UTC)
ALT1 ... that although the video game Star Trek: Deep Space Nine: The Fallen attracted positive reviews, its lack of multiplayer was criticised as "one of the worst game-design decisions" made that year?

That sounds fine to me. Miyagawa (talk) 19:03, 28 August 2013 (UTC)

Cool. Let's get this out of the door then (using ALT1). Prioryman (talk) 19:36, 29 August 2013 (UTC)