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The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by PanydThe muffin is not subtle 23:27, 28 November 2011 (UTC)

Stalinist show trial of the Kraków Curia

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The image on the right is a cropped version of File:Stalinizm - proces Kurii Krakowskiej (1953).jpg used in the actual article. The original photo includes large background and therefore, it would not be descriptive enough at 100x100px required here. Sorry about that. — A. Kupicki (talk) 20:34, 8 November 2011 (UTC)

Created/expanded by A. Kupicki (talk). Self nom at 18:53, 8 November 2011 (UTC)

  • Length is fine at 5521 characters, and the date of creation is also good (November 7, 2011); the hook is referenced to the only English language reference in the article, and is fine. Spotchecks carried out on the English language ref reveal some close paraphrasing:
  • article "Brystygier – a dogmatic ideologue born to a Jewish family in Stryj (now Ukraine) – earnestly desired to destroy all religion as an "opiate of the masses"."
  • source "Brystygier was a dogmatic Marxist, who yearned to destroy all religion as an "opiate for the masses"."
  • article "Brystygier persecuted other congregations as well,"
  • source "She also persecuted other congregations:"

I'm concerned that these may also imply a level of close paraphrasing within the foreign language references, though I will AGF for those, and if these two are reworded appropriately, I'll approve the article. Harrias talk 20:37, 27 November 2011 (UTC)

 Done. Since so many sources there are not in English, but in Polish, I tried to make sure initially that the only English language reference is not misrepresented in any way, that's why I kept so close to it. However, I already fixed that. Please check it out.
article 1. "Brystygier – dedicated herself to ideological struggle against all forms of religion."
article 2. "Brystygier was responsible for apprehension and punishment of 2,000 Jehovah's Witnesses for their religious beliefs."
Please let me know if you see anything else. And thanks for the review. — A. Kupicki (talk)
No, it looks good now. Image is tagged appropriately, and suitable for the main page. Good to go. Harrias talk 08:07, 28 November 2011 (UTC)
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