Template:Did you know nominations/St Mary's Church, Acton Burnell

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The result was: promoted by Miyagawa (talk) 01:19, 26 October 2012 (UTC)

St Mary's Church, Acton Burnell

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... that Robert Burnell, founder of St Mary's Church, Acton Burnell, Shropshire, (pictured) became Lord Chancellor of England, and then Bishop of Bath and Wells?

Reviewed: Clarinet Concerto No. 2 (Arnold)

Created/expanded by Peter I. Vardy (talk). Self nom at 15:41, 11 October 2012 (UTC)

The article meets DYK criteria of date of creation and length and the image is appropriately licensed. However the hook is unsatisfactory because the facts about Robert Burnell are not mentioned and cited in the article (though they are in an unreferenced footnote). Either they should be added to the article and cited, or an alternative hook should be chosen. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:55, 14 October 2012 (UTC)

Footnote (which WAS referenced) incorporated into the text. --Peter I. Vardy (talk) 09:27, 14 October 2012 (UTC)

Needs re-review of hook per above. BlueMoonset (talk) 17:01, 25 October 2012 (UTC)

Hook fact is now suitably referenced and all DYK criteria met. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 19:45, 25 October 2012 (UTC)