Template:Did you know nominations/Southend Tournament

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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 23:04, 20 June 2015 (UTC)

Southend Tournament

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~~... that the first 36 holes of the 1937 Southend Tournament were played in May but, because of heavy rain, the final 36 holes were not played until September?~~

Created by Nigej (talk). Self-nominated at 16:49, 5 June 2015 (UTC).

ALT1 ... that the first 36 holes of the 1937 Southend Tournament were played in May but the final 36 holes were played in September?

Thought that maybe removing the reason for the delay might make readers a little more curious and interested in finding out why. --Bcp67 (talk) 20:14, 11 June 2015 (UTC)

This article is new enough and long enough. ALT1 is more enticing and I have struck the original hook. The hook facts are sourced, the article is neutral, and I detected no close paraphrasing. I do not think that Nigej needs to do a QPQ review. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:59, 19 June 2015 (UTC)