Template:Did you know nominations/Sophie, Princess of Prussia

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The result was: promoted by Crisco 1492 (talk) 16:12, 10 September 2011 (UTC)

Sophie, Princess of Prussia

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... that on 25 August 2011, Sophie of Isenburg married Georg Friedrich, the head of the House of Hohenzollern in a civil ceremony?

Created/expanded by Ruby2010 (talk), Ejgreen77 (talk). Nominated by Ruby2010 (talk) at 03:04, 8 September 2011 (UTC)

Reviewed Comfort Momoh Ruby comment! 03:20, 8 September 2011 (UTC)

Sources are fine; spotchecked and looks okay. Creation date is good. I think the hook is slightly weak and could be expanded to include something to the effect that they had two ceremonies and that the second ceremony was during a 950 year commemoration, or something like that. I'm bad at writing hooks though, so no help to you, I"m afraid. Otherwise fine and ready to go. Truthkeeper (talk) 23:39, 9 September 2011 (UTC)

ALT1 ...that Sophie of Isenburg married Prince Georg Friedrich in commemoration of the 950th anniversary of the founding of the House of Hohenzollern?

ALT2: ...that in commemoration of the 950th anniversary of the founding of the House of Hohenzollern, Sophie of Isenburg married its head, Prince Georg Friedrich?

How do these look? Ruby comment! 01:51, 10 September 2011 (UTC)

I like ALT 1 - "its head" in ALT 2 is a bit awkward. Truthkeeper (talk) 01:57, 10 September 2011 (UTC)