Template:Did you know nominations/Sony Xperia XZ

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The result was: rejected by BlueMoonset (talk) 20:44, 21 September 2016 (UTC)
Withdrawn by nominator

Sony Xperia XZ

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• ... that the Sony Xperia XZ is the first smartphone to feature five-axis sensor-shift image stabilization for photos and video?

• ALT1:... that the Sony Xperia XZ features five-axis sensor-shift image stabilization for photos and video?

Created by Ayub407 (talk). Self-nominated at 10:27, 5 September 2016 (UTC).

 • No issues found with article, ready for human review.

• • ✓ This article is new and was created on 14:47, 01 September 2016 (UTC)
  • ✓ This article meets the DYK criteria at 3375 characters
  • ✓ All paragraphs in this article have at least one citation
  • ✓ This article has no outstanding maintenance tags
  • ✓ A copyright violation is unlikely according to automated metrics (3.8% confidence; confirm)
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 • No overall issues detected

• • ✓ The hook ALT0 is an appropriate length at 124 characters
  • ✓ The hook ALT1 is an appropriate length at 95 characters
  • ✓ Ayub407 has fewer than 5 DYK credits. No QPQ required. Note a QPQ will be required after 3 more DYKs.

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• @Ayub407: - I gotta say this reads like an ad for the phone, I don't think that's appropriate for the front page of Wikipedia.  MPJ-DK  22:39, 18 September 2016 (UTC)

• While the hook itself is fine, and the article is new, the neutrality is called into question. As noted by MPJ-DK, it appears to read more like a press release for all the fabulous bits and bobs this new device has to offer. I'd want to see a section on development and Reception before considering to pass this. (Also QPQ needs to be done).--Coin945 (talk) 03:51, 19 September 2016 (UTC)

I would like to withdraw my nomination because I need more time to expand the article as there no reliable sources for development and reception available at this time. Btw, according to the bot, I have to do QPQ after 3 more DYK nominations. Ayub407^talk 07:31, 19 September 2016 (UTC)

Ahh yes, you are correct regarding QPQ.--Coin945 (talk) 08:21, 19 September 2016 (UTC)