Template:Did you know nominations/Sonia Orbuch

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 07:21, 1 January 2019 (UTC)

Sonia Orbuch

(

• Back to T:TDYK
• Article history

)

• ... that Second World War Jewish resistance fighter Sarah Orbuch was renamed Sonia Orbuch to sound more Russian?

• Reviewed: Yao Baoqian

Created by Philafrenzy (talk) and Whispyhistory (talk). Nominated by Whispyhistory (talk) at 22:38, 7 November 2018 (UTC).

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: Interesting:

QPQ: Done.

Overall: @Philafrenzy and Whispyhistory: Looks good. Interesting read! I had to do some minor copyedits and add the inline citation for the hook myself, fyi. cymru.lass (talk • contribs) 17:38, 8 November 2018 (UTC)

• Hi, I came by to promote this, but without even reading the article I can tell you that this hook is not hooky. Most Jews in Russia used Russian names. Can you please come up with another hook? Thanks, Yoninah (talk) 17:56, 19 December 2018 (UTC)

• sure...can @Philafrenzy: think of one...I can't. Whispyhistory (talk) 19:28, 19 December 2018 (UTC)

I will try. Of course she was Polish, not Russian. Philafrenzy (talk) 21:03, 19 December 2018 (UTC)

• How about:
• ALT1: ... that Polish Jewish resistance fighter Sonia Orbuch was drafted into the Red Army at the age of 16? Yoninah (talk) 21:28, 19 December 2018 (UTC)

I like it. Philafrenzy (talk) 22:09, 19 December 2018 (UTC)

• Thank you. New reviewer needed for ALT1. Pinging original reviewer @Cymru.lass:. Yoninah (talk) 22:56, 19 December 2018 (UTC)

@Yoninah and Philafrenzy: looks good to me. Hook is supported by inline ref for the sentence immediately following the sentence where it appears in the body of the article. Hook-y enough for me, though I do prefer ALT0. Y'all're good to go! cymru.lass (talk • contribs) 23:07, 19 December 2018 (UTC)

@Philafrenzy and Whispyhistory: - hi, I came here to promote this, but the fact that she was drafted in 1944 is not cited inline in the article. L293D (☎ • ✎) 21:06, 21 December 2018 (UTC)

Thanks. Is it okay now? She was drafted into the Red Army in 1944.[1]. Added to article. Whispyhistory (talk) 07:59, 22 December 2018 (UTC)

Pinging L293D Vincent^LUFan (talk) (Kenton!) 14:24, 25 December 2018 (UTC)

Replacing tick as matters have been resolved. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 07:21, 1 January 2019 (UTC)