Template:Did you know nominations/Sloan–Parker House

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:44, 6 January 2018 (UTC)

Sloan–Parker House

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Sloan–Parker House viewed from U.S. Route 50

• ... that the Sloan–Parker House (pictured) was built for an indentured servant who eloped and ran away with his employer's daughter?
  Sources:
  1. Harding, James E. (April 15, 1975). National Register of Historic Places Registration Form: The Stone House (PDF). United States Department of the Interior, National Park Service. p. 3 of the PDF. Archived from the original (PDF) on July 13, 2016. Retrieved November 28, 2017.
  2. "Old Stone House Grew Up With Hampshire County". Cumberland Evening Times. Cumberland, Maryland. October 6, 1975. p. 5. Retrieved November 29, 2017 – via NewspaperArchive.com.
  3. Brannon, Selden W. (1976). Historic Hampshire: A Symposium of Hampshire County and Its People, Past and Present. Parsons, West Virginia: McClain Printing Company. p. 333. ISBN 978-0-87012-236-1. OCLC 3121468.

• Reviewed: Janai Haupapa
• Comment: As there is a lot of interesting content in this article, I would am open to other suggestions!

5x expanded by West Virginian (talk). Self-nominated at 04:24, 30 November 2017 (UTC).

• new enough, more than long enough, hook cited, image property licensed, DYK check clean. Would suggest trimming the lede though, many of the items should be in the body. Maury Markowitz (talk) 18:21, 30 November 2017 (UTC)

• @West Virginian: I was preparing to promote this, but on looking at the article, I think the hook is misleading. The hook suggests his employer built the house for him and this is not the case. Please could you suggest one or more alternative hooks. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:27, 31 December 2017 (UTC)

• Cwmhiraeth, Happy New Year's Eve and thank you for your attention to this article and its associated hook. Would the following alternative hook work better and be less misleading? -- West Virginian (talk) 14:06, 31 December 2017 (UTC)

• ALT1: ... that after Richard Sloan eloped and ran away with his employer's daughter Charlotte, the couple settled in the Mill Creek valley and built the Sloan–Parker House (pictured) around 1790?

• That's fine. Replacing Maury Markowitz' tick and striking original hook. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 14:14, 31 December 2017 (UTC)

• Cwmhiraeth, thank you again for taking the time to improve this hook. -- West Virginian (talk) 15:03, 31 December 2017 (UTC)