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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:38, 13 March 2017 (UTC)

Shyam Swarup Agarwal

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Created by Tachs (talk). Self-nominated at 07:13, 2 March 2017 (UTC).

  • New and long enough, within policy, Earwig detects no copyvios, QPQ done. Minor questions about the hooks. For ALT0, abbreviations should be avoided in the hook; Sanjay Gandhi Postgraduate Institute of Medical Sciences should be written out, and DM should be wikilinked to make it clear what degree it is. For ALT1, the sources did not say that Agarwal led a team, just that he participated in the research. Also, the hook and article both say "Bhopas" instead of "Bhopal"; is this a typo or an alternate spelling? In all, this article is very near Good Article status and I would encourage you to nominate it for that status as well. John P. Sadowski (NIOSH) (talk) 03:02, 4 March 2017 (UTC)
Thanks @John P. Sadowski (NIOSH): for the suggestions. I have noted here ALT3 and ALT4, correcting the errors noted in your comments.jojo@nthony (talk) 07:32, 4 March 2017 (UTC)
Awesome. I've made slight tweaks to the hooks for brevity. ALT3 preferred, ALT4 also approved. John P. Sadowski (NIOSH) (talk) 20:49, 4 March 2017 (UTC)
ALT4 hook promoted rather than ALT3 because not all the facts in ALT3 are included in the article. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:38, 13 March 2017 (UTC)