Template:Did you know nominations/Shah Suwar

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The result was: promoted by AirshipJungleman29 talk 01:02, 9 May 2024 (UTC)

Shah Suwar

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• ... that a major parade took place in Cairo on 24 August 1472 for the hanging of Shah Suwar (r. 1466–72), the ninth ruler of Dulkadir, who clashed with the Mamluk Egypt throughout the entirety of his reign? Source: Yinanç, Refet (1989). Dulkadir Beyliği (in Turkish). Ankara: Turkish Historical Society Press. pp. 74–76. ISBN 9751601711. OCLC 21676736.
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Improved to Good Article status by Aintabli (talk).

Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

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Aintabli (talk) 03:45, 25 April 2024 (UTC).

• You can't have parentheses in the hook per WP:DYK200, and I'd expect a more merciless reviewer to truncate the hook at "Suwar".--Launchballer 07:37, 25 April 2024 (UTC)

  @Launchballer: I don't mind changing the hook to:

Alt1 ...that a major parade took place in Cairo on 24 August 1472 for the hanging of Shah Suwar?

or something similar. Aintabli (talk) 14:16, 25 April 2024 (UTC)

Fine by me. Full review needed.--Launchballer 14:19, 25 April 2024 (UTC)

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Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
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QPQ: None required.

Overall: A lot of this is taken on faith because this is a GA and because of the way it's sourced. Too bad there is no photo. Alt 1 is the prferred hook. --evrik ^(talk) 17:37, 8 May 2024 (UTC)