Template:Did you know nominations/Sendiri

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The result was: promoted by PFHLai (talk) 20:48, 17 March 2012 (UTC)

Sendiri

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... that Chrisye produced Sendiri ("Alone") with his best friend, his brother-in-law, and someone who idolized him?

ALT1:... that Chrisye wasn't alone on Alone?
ALT2:... that over 100,000 people were Alone with Chrisye?

Created/expanded by Crisco 1492 (talk). Self nom at 06:58, 3 March 2012 (UTC)

At first I thought this nomination was for Chrisye, an article that would not qualify for DYK. On further consideration, I think this nomination must relate to Sendiri even though its title is Chrisye. Sendiri is both new enough and long enough but all the hooks have problems because I see no connection between the article and the word "alone". If Sendiri translates from the Indonesian as "alone", you should make this fact explicit in the article. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 19:20, 16 March 2012 (UTC)

It's in the lede. You're right, I've changed the title and DYK credit template Crisco 1492 (talk) 22:57, 16 March 2012 (UTC)

Reviewing: Isshin-ji

OK then. I think ALT1 or ALT2 are better as it is not clear in the original hook whether his best friend was his brother-in-law and whether this was also the person who idolized him. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 07:14, 17 March 2012 (UTC)

Thanks for the review! Crisco 1492 (talk) 08:28, 17 March 2012 (UTC)