Template:Did you know nominations/Sandra Holden, Softball in Tasmania
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The result was: promoted by Miyagawa (talk) 21:42, 27 March 2012 (UTC)
Sandra Holden, Softball in Tasmania
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- ... that Tasmanian softball recruited Aussie Spirit player Sandra Holden (pictured) one year because they did not have enough players for an all Tasmanian team in the Gilleys Shield?
- Reviewed: Victoire Conroy, Hurt: The EP
- Comment: Article moved (possibly merged) from my user space. Bidgee co-nommed because took pictures specifically for DYK nom.
Created/expanded by LauraHale (talk), Bidgee (talk). Nominated by LauraHale (talk) at 12:59, 26 March 2012 (UTC)
- Hook: not sure of its grammaticality. Why not something like ALT1 ... that Aussie Spirit player Sandra Holden (pictured) was drafted to represent Tasmania in softball one year when there were not enough players for an all Tasmanian team in the Gilleys Shield? Cited, interesting, image is fine
- Holden: New enough, long enough. Well referenced, paraphrasing check against this source is fine
- SiT: I'd suggest expanding the lede a bit, a sentence or two. Other than that, looks fine:
SiT article looks unprofessional with only 5 words in the lede. Crisco 1492 (talk) 10:25, 27 March 2012 (UTC)
ALT1 good to go! Crisco 1492 (talk) 10:38, 27 March 2012 (UTC)
