Template:Did you know nominations/Samestate

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The result was: promoted by PumpkinSky talk 00:27, 14 June 2012 (UTC)

Samestate

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... that Samestate had two Top-20 songs "Hurricane" and "Shadows" on the Christian CHR chart?

Created/expanded by HotHat (talk). Self nom at 08:26, 18 May 2012 (UTC)

Newarticle (nom'd within day of creation), long enough. Hook is rather confusing though, maybe cut down the repetitious "and" and include only 1 or 2 facts. Refs are good, but #1 is a primary source and, granted its supplemented by ohter sources, it doesnt need to be there. Also 14/15 need to be verifiable and the album subsection is wholly unsourced. Not sure if this is notable enough...only CSM is a notable source. Possibly HM, but that this bands stands out as notable condifering the variety of bands is questionable. Also the lead needs to explain what Nazanine is...perhaps by wikilink. Otherwise the page is mostly well done and set, though i would suggest cutting down the 1-sentence paragraphs by, perhaps, including them all into 1 para.Lihaas (talk) 12:12, 5 June 2012 (UTC)

Fixed most concerns and addressed the tag to make it shorter. I don't understand what you want me to do with the LEAD section. I cannot find a public chart for the Christian Songs that included the song at its peak, so I put CHR in the blurb.HotHat (talk) 21:32, 5 June 2012 (UTC)

Is there a source for the format of the album? And where did source 14 come from? nOtherwise all set.Lihaas (talk) 10:02, 6 June 2012 (UTC)

I got the format sourced per Amazon.com and source 14 now 15 is from my access to the databases at my university! The source cannot be publically available or attainable, or else I would be able to provide it.HotHat (talk) 10:39, 6 June 2012 (UTC)

For the latter you could use some sort of link and add the subscription required tag?Lihaas (talk) 10:02, 7 June 2012 (UTC)

Fixed it with the id and subscription required tag.HotHat (talk) 00:21, 10 June 2012 (UTC)

All set.Lihaas (talk) 12:48, 12 June 2012 (UTC)