Template:Did you know nominations/Sallyanne Payton

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The result was: promoted by 97198 (talk) 11:36, 26 April 2020 (UTC)

Sallyanne Payton

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~~... that Sallyanne Payton was Stanford Law School’s first African-American graduate?~~ Stanford Black Law Students Association Celebrates 50th Anniversary "Stanford Law School’s first black graduate, Sallyanne Payton ‘68."

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Created by HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk). Self-nominated at 21:09, 1 April 2020 (UTC).

Article created on April 1 with 1,698 characters. Reads neutral and uses inline citations. No copyright violations. Hook is short and interesting, easily verifiable by the source given. QPQ already done, this should be good. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 03:17, 3 April 2020 (UTC)

Hi, I came by to promote this, but is this all she's known for? Has she done anything else in the last 50 years? Perhaps start the hook ... that Sallyanne Payton, Stanford Law School’s first African-American graduate, did this .... Thanks, Yoninah (talk) 19:27, 25 April 2020 (UTC)

ALT1: ~~... that Sallyanne Payton, Stanford Law School's first African-American graduate, served as the legal counsel for the Clinton Health Care Reform Task Force?~~

ALT2 ~~that Sallyanne Payton, Stanford Law School’s first African-American graduate, worked at the University of Michigan Law School from 1976 until 2013?~~

Yoninah, are these better? HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 20:14, 25 April 2020 (UTC)

@HickoryOughtShirt?4: ALT1 sounds good, but the source says she was an "adviser", not "legal counsel". Yoninah (talk) 20:22, 25 April 2020 (UTC)

Yoninah, not sure where I got "legal counsel" from but I have altered the wording. So ALT1a: ... that Sallyanne Payton, Stanford Law School's first African-American graduate, served as an adviser for the Clinton Health Care Reform Task Force?

Thanks. ALT1a verified and cited inline. Rest of review per Nova Crystallis. ALT1a good to go. Yoninah (talk) 20:28, 25 April 2020 (UTC)