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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:02, 9 July 2016 (UTC)

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Roya Sadat, Alka Sadat

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Created by Nvvchar (talk). Self-nominated at 07:01, 10 June 2016 (UTC).

  • QPQ is done
Roya Sadat
  • Is new enough, is long enough, no copyright violations
  • Hook cited Red XN, well written Red XN
  • There are some issues with the prose, it could use a good copy edit to eliminate some of the odd sentence structure. There is no source in the article where the name "Roya Film House" is mentioned, the hook must be explicitly cited.
  • Copy edited. Corrected to "Roya Film House" in the hook text and fixed a reference
Alka Sadat
  • Image seems to check out
  • Article is new enough, is long enough, No general source issues. No copyright violations. Better prose than the other article, but could still benefit from a little copyediting
  • Hook cited Red XN - once again the words "Roya Film House" are not listed with a source, and unlike her sister's article the actual body of the article does not mention her co-founding the Roya Film House"
  • Just noticed that this one calls it the "Roya" not the Royal like the Hook. I assume that's a typo?
    • Corrected and hook cited
  • @Nvvchar: - source issues needs to be addressed and some copyediting to improve the English would be good too.  MPJ-US  01:38, 20 June 2016 (UTC)
  • MPJ-DK Copy edited both articles Typo error fixed in the hook to "Roya Film House" and also fixed a reference. Alka Sadat has changed her img in Wikicommons and used it in the Infobox but it is not getting corrected in this hook. I can not resolve the technical hitch. Please see.Nvvchar. 02:03, 22 June 2016 (UTC)
  • Nvvchar} - Looks okay now and image looks changed to me.  MPJ-US  23:48, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

Pulled from prep and reopened per Wikipedia_talk:Did_you_know/Archive_124#Prep_3:_the_many_awards_of_Roya_Sadat. Fram (talk) 13:18, 23 June 2016 (UTC)

  • Adding icon to prevent re-promotion before issues are addressed. BlueMoonset (talk) 19:13, 23 June 2016 (UTC)

So much has happened to the article since the first review that a full new review is best. Fram (talk) 07:52, 28 June 2016 (UTC)

  • ok, both articles are of sufficient size and written neutrally, copyvio checks are clear. There are sources that confirm they have won awards. I haven't seen any source that would confirm the use of "many", which is nebulous anyway. I dont' see where this source confirms her winning an award as it is at the end of "The latest award she received was at the Aljazeera International Documentary Film Festival! 2011 on "Public Liberties & Human Rights"" - unless I am missing something? I think a hook mentioning they are sisters and making films in Afghanistan is interesting in an of itself without the need to mention awards possibly if worded right. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 21:29, 3 July 2016 (UTC)
  • CasliberThanks for the review. I have struck out the original hook. I am suggesting the following ALT1 hook. ... that Roya Sadat and her sister Alka Sadat (pictured), directors of feature films and documentaries in the post Taliban regime in Afghanistan, have established the Roya Film House?Nvvchar. 01:26, 4 July 2016 (UTC)
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