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The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Miyagawa (talk) 19:30, 14 October 2013 (UTC)

2013 Rosario gas explosion

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5x expanded by Cambalachero (talk). Self nominated at 14:23, 10 September 2013 (UTC).

  • Firstly, I moved the page to 2013 Rosario gas explosion to make it consistent with similar titles. 5x expansion verified. New enough, long enough, well-referenced. Foreign-language refs AGF. There is one citation needed tag in the lead that needs to be replaced with a source. Also, the hook is boring. How about writing something about residents smelling gas earlier, or about the candidates ending their campaigns? Yoninah (talk) 20:27, 9 October 2013 (UTC)
  • Thank you, that's a lot better. I would suggest saying "gas explosion" rather than just "explosion". However, the article states that only "some" candidates ended their campaign as a result. Is the wording in the article incorrect? After you make sure that the referenced statement in the article and the hook say the same thing, we'll be ready to go. Yoninah (talk) 17:20, 12 October 2013 (UTC)
  • Yes, "some" was the intended word. The national mourning and the request to end the political campaigns was not mandatory. The major political parties ended their campaigns, but minor ones did not. There was a demonstration called by minor parties for a few days afterwards, and it was not cancelled; but few people attended it Cambalachero (talk) 02:39, 14 October 2013 (UTC)
  • Thanks for the explanation. I tweaked the hook. Foreign-language hook ref AGF. ALT1 good to go. Yoninah (talk) 13:20, 14 October 2013 (UTC)