Template:Did you know nominations/Roberto Javier Mora García

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The result was: promoted by Miyagawa (talk) 09:22, 20 January 2013 (UTC)

Roberto Javier Mora García

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• ... that journalist Roberto Javier Mora García was stabbed 26 times and killed for allegedly reporting on the Mexican drug cartels?

• Comment: I used the word "allegedly" because the crime is unsolved, but the evidence leads that way.

Created/expanded by ComputerJA (talk). Self nom at 02:13, 31 December 2012 (UTC)

• Article length, date of creation satisfy criteria. It is sourced and neutral, and contains inline citations where required. Hook is a good length, though I've suggested an alternate placement for the word allegedly, which was confusing in the original hook. Mindmatrix 22:15, 3 January 2013 (UTC)
• ALT1: ... that journalist Roberto Javier Mora García was stabbed 26 times and killed, allegedly for reporting on the Mexican drug cartels?

• Much better. . I support the ALT1 hook. ComputerJA (talk) 22:27, 3 January 2013 (UTC)

• This has been ready to go for a while now. New enough, long enough, well-referenced, no close paraphrasing seen in sources. ALT1 good to go. Yoninah (talk) 21:40, 19 January 2013 (UTC)