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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Montanabw(talk) 05:49, 31 May 2016 (UTC)

Roadeo

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  • Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Yezi
  • Comment: There's room for improvement for that hook. Notice that I've changed "cars" (as the sourced sentence appears in the Word Nerd source) to the more general "motor vehicles". I will continue searching for a source that uses the exact wording in the hook. Also, the lead needs a bit of expansion, but I'll work on that after I get this nomination in.

Created by APerson (talk). Self-nominated at 01:41, 20 May 2016 (UTC).

  • Try to have at least one inline citation at the end of each paragraph. SSTflyer 02:53, 25 May 2016 (UTC)
    Fixed. Pinging SSTflyer. APerson (talk!) 13:05, 25 May 2016 (UTC)
  • Looks good. Article is long enough, new enough, cited, and free of copyvio issues. QPQ is complete. Hook could be improved but I think it's passing. Ashorocetus (talk | contribs) 16:06, 30 May 2016 (UTC)