Template:Did you know nominations/Rhiannon Davies Jones
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The result was: withdrawn by nominator, closed by Narutolovehinata5 (talk) 06:55, 24 June 2020 (UTC)
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Rhiannon Davies Jones
- ... that novelist Rhiannon Davies Jones wrote Eryr Pengwern in response to Gwynfor Evans' hunger strike threat for a Welsh television channel? Source: Jones, Sarah Rhiannon Davies (1921 – 2014), author and lecturer": Dictionary of Welsh Biography
- ALT1:... that novelist Rhiannon Davies Jones was inspired to write Lleian Llan Llŷr from the Investiture of the Prince of Wales and the deaths of two young activists in Abergele? Source: Rhiannon Davies Jones: Welsh-language author whose impassioned historical novels carried a nationalist message: The Independent
Created by MWright96 (talk). Self-nominated at 12:09, 26 May 2020 (UTC).
New enough, long enough, neutrally written, well referenced. There is a little close paraphrasing in your ALT1 hook; surely you can rewrite the deaths of two young activists
, perhaps indicating they died from their own bomb. In general, the writing in this article is very dense, much more difficult to read than your usual articles.- Regarding the hooks, it took me a while to figure out what the first hook is saying until I read the article. (Not good for a hook.) ALT1 is easier, but I think it's talking about the wrong book. It would help to identify her as a
Welsh novelist
in the hook. QPQ done. Yoninah (talk) 20:01, 22 June 2020 (UTC)
