Template:Did you know nominations/Reema Juffali

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 11:07, 13 January 2020 (UTC)

Reema Juffali

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Juffali at Oulton Park in 2019

Juffali in her F4 car at Thruxton Circuit, 2019

... that in November 2019, Reema Juffali was the first Saudi Arabian female car racing driver to compete in an international racing event held in Saudi Arabia as the country lifted the ban against women to drive in September 2017?
ALT0a: ~~... that Reema Juffali was the first Saudi Arabian female car racing driver to compete in an international racing event held in Saudi Arabia?~~ First Saudi woman driver to race car in kingdom - Reema Juffali makes history
In first, Saudi woman to drive race car in kingdom
- ALT1:~~... that Reema Juffali is the first ever Saudi female car racing driver as well as the first Saudi female race license holder?~~ Source: "You are strongly encouraged to quote the source text supporting each hook" (and [link] the source, or cite it briefly without using citation templates)

Created by Abishe (talk). Self-nominated at 06:03, 2 December 2019 (UTC).

Good to go, long enough (just), new enough, well-cited and hook directly cited. I suspect this article will grow over time, as her career has only just started. Prefer Alt1. Maury Markowitz (talk) 15:03, 3 December 2019 (UTC)

Sorry:

is there a QPQ required here? I can't tell. Maury Markowitz (talk) 15:10, 3 December 2019 (UTC)

Reviewed Affect Labeling Abishe (talk) 16:04, 3 December 2019 (UTC)

I created this article to contribute to the Asian Month/2019. Well I am looking to make the adjustments as mentioned above. Abishe (talk) 15:35, 3 December 2019 (UTC)

QPQ done, good to go. Maury Markowitz (talk) 02:24, 5 December 2019 (UTC)

Have you considered adding the image of the car? It's CC-by-SA so that's usable, and I think it would definitely end up in the upper spot. Maury Markowitz (talk) 02:25, 5 December 2019 (UTC)

Will it be possible to include that image in the main page if nominated. I can consider adding that instead of the person's image. File:F4 Thruxton Test Day 17-04-2019 57.jpg. Abishe (talk) 07:12, 5 December 2019 (UTC)

The QPQ is not a full review. And ALT1 uses the word "first" too many times. I think ALT0 is good, just needs to be trimmed of all the dates. Yoninah (talk) 11:53, 6 December 2019 (UTC)

Better to use ALT0 because that is the main hook to be nominated. So I just removed the alternate sentence. Thank you. I also removed the phrase regarding the ban being lifted against women in Saudi Arabia to drive in September 2017 Abishe (talk) 12:46, 6 December 2019 (UTC)

@Abishe: I have restored the thread, labeling your new hook ALT0a. In future, please do not edit hooks but place new ones at the bottom of the thread, so other editors and promoters can follow the discussion. Yoninah (talk) 16:28, 7 December 2019 (UTC)

ALT0a is okay, but I would suggest this tweak:
ALT0b: ... that Reema Juffali (pictured) is the first Saudi Arabian woman to obtain a racing license and to compete in an international racing event held in the kingdom?
You have two freely-licensed images here, which I think would add a lot to this hook, so I've added them to the nomination. Yoninah (talk) 16:51, 7 December 2019 (UTC)

Sorry for the late response here. Thank you so much for the modification of the blurbs. I have made some careless mistakes by editing the hooks. Abishe (talk) 01:34, 8 December 2019 (UTC)

Thank you. Restoring tick for ALT0b per Maury Markowitz's review. Yoninah (talk) 01:58, 8 December 2019 (UTC)

OK, I came by to promote this, but the chart needs some references. Yoninah (talk) 23:49, 12 January 2020 (UTC)

Actually I didn't add the chart analysis and statistics of her. So I removed it since I couldn't able to find reliable sources to verify the stats. Abishe (talk) 02:35, 13 January 2020 (UTC)

Thank you. Restoring tick. Yoninah (talk) 11:06, 13 January 2020 (UTC)