Template:Did you know nominations/Rama Rahasya Upanishad

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The result was: promoted by Ashorocetus (talk | contribs) 04:18, 14 March 2016 (UTC)

Rama Rahasya Upanishad

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Hanuman showing Rama in his heart

~~... that in the Rama Rahasya Upanishad recited mostly by Hanuman (pictured), Rama is the supreme reality Brahman, same as major Hindu deities, and the means to satcitananda and liberation?~~

Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Whakamana Cannabis Museum

Created by Nvvchar (talk) and Ms Sarah Welch (talk). Nominated by Nvvchar (talk) at 05:50, 15 February 2016 (UTC).

The article is sublime, as I've come to expect from Nvvchar and Ms Sarah Welch who have been knocking it out of the park with these articles on hindu sagas. QPQ done, no copyvios noted. Sources accepted per AGF. This particular submission has got only one problem: I have difficulty understanding the hook. Either it's grammatically incorrect or it's phrased in an exceptionally difficult manner. Please rephrase it, and I will probably be able to flick this to approve.—♦♦ AMBER^(ЯʘCK) 21:26, 11 March 2016 (UTC)

Amberrock Thanks for the review. The hook is reworded to ALT1 ... that in the Rama Rahasya Upanishad recited mostly by Hanuman (pictured), Rama is the supreme reality Brahman and is a means to satcitananda and liberation? Nvvchar. 04:21, 13 March 2016 (UTC)

@Nvvchar: I struck out the main hook. How about,

ALT1b: ... that in the Rama Rahasya Upanishad recited mostly by Hanuman (pictured), Rama is the supreme reality Brahman and the means to liberation?
ALT2: ... that the Rama Rahasya Upanishad presents a goddess as the cause of creation, a god as the soul, both together as the source of all existence?
ALT3: ... that the Rama Rahasya Upanishad of Hinduism is a modern era religious text dated to the 17th century?

@Amberrock: We are done with the Upanishads. Wikipedia now has articles on all 108 Upanishads. There are two more, beyond that list, which someday we can add to the wiki collection, as they are interesting, beautifully written, historically notable texts. Thanks to you and to all who have done Upanishad DYK reviews so far. Ms Sarah Welch (talk) 04:40, 13 March 2016 (UTC)

I like ALT2 the best, although ALT1b may also suffice. I leave this up to whomever closes this nomination. And by the way: no, thank you for being such diligent authors! If only Wikipedia had more people with your level of dedication to quality content.—♦♦ AMBER^(ЯʘCK) 09:11, 13 March 2016 (UTC)