Template:Did you know nominations/Raúl Hernández Barrón

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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 21:14, 3 October 2019 (UTC)

Raúl Hernández Barrón

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~~... that U.S. citizens were prohibited from engaging in business activities with Raúl Hernández Barrón?~~ Source: "U.S. persons are prohibited from conducting financial or commercial transactions with the designees [including Raúl Hernández Barrón] and any assets that the designated individuals may have under U.S. jurisdiction are frozen." (USDOT) Source: "with the objective of denying their businesses and agents access to the U.S. financial system and the benefits of trade and transactions involving U.S. companies and individuals ... 39. HERNANDEZ BARRON, Raul" (GPO)

Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Julie Dretzin
Comment: Most sources are in Spanish but hook is cited in English

Moved to mainspace by MX (talk). Self-nominated at 13:34, 19 September 2019 (UTC).

@MX: New enough and plenty long enough. Hook is backed up (requires both sources) and included. Ping me when you have completed a QPQ. Raymie (t • c) 03:09, 21 September 2019 (UTC)

@Raymie: QPQ done. Thanks for the review. MX (✉ • ✎) 04:11, 21 September 2019 (UTC)

Then have a tick! Raymie (t • c) 04:12, 21 September 2019 (UTC)

@MX: you've done this hook wording before. Do you have a different suggestion? Thanks, Yoninah (talk) 21:44, 25 September 2019 (UTC)

@Yoninah: I potentially could. But what's the policy for hooks with similar wording that have been used before? I tried looking this up but didn't find anything. MX (✉ • ✎) 22:12, 26 September 2019 (UTC)

@MX: There is no policy. But I remember it from before, and other readers might too. Isn't there anything else to say about him? Yoninah (talk) 22:18, 26 September 2019 (UTC)

@Yoninah: New hooks proposed below. Let me know what you think.

ALT1 ... that after deserting from the Mexican Army, Raúl Hernández Barrón joined a drug cartel?

ALT2 ... that the arrest of Raúl Hernández Barrón highlighted the growing presence of organized crime in Veracruz, Mexico?

ALT3 ... that suspected drug lord Raúl Hernández Barrón claimed to be a policeman to avoid being arrested?

ALT4 ... that Raúl Hernández Barrón reportedly killed a singer for playing a song that taunted a drug cartel?

Thank you, they are all good suggestions. ALT3, which I tweaked, and ALT4 are best IMO. Pinging Raymie for review of these new hooks. Yoninah (talk) 22:44, 28 September 2019 (UTC)

Approving ALT2 and ALT3 as the best of the new bunch of hooks, otherwise relying on Raymie's review. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:23, 2 October 2019 (UTC)