Template:Did you know nominations/R Sagittae

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The result was: promoted by 97198 (talk) 12:10, 9 June 2015 (UTC)

R Sagittae

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• ... that the star R Sagittae has 90% of the mass and 10,000 times the luminosity of the Sun?

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Created by Casliber (talk) and Lithopsian (talk). Nominated by Casliber (talk) at 07:41, 23 May 2015 (UTC).

• Long enough at 1,876 characters, new enough as created on 22 May, well sourced by journals so AGF, its neutrally written and hook is definitely interesting. Im not sure the hook is right though, should it not be 90% of the mass rather than 90% as massive. Blethering Scot 21:18, 23 May 2015 (UTC)

• Ok - made it noun/noun...how's that? Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 21:38, 23 May 2015 (UTC)

Yeah that is fine and reads more like it does in the article. This is good to go.Blethering Scot 21:40, 23 May 2015 (UTC)