Template:Did you know nominations/Pre-Tolstojan

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The result was: promoted by BlueMoonset (talk) 18:03, 10 October 2012 (UTC)

Pre-Tolstojan

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... that location of Lobate scarps and their relative age, overlaid on a geometric map of Mercury using Mariner 10 Mosaics (pictured) indicate that these formations occurred in Pre-Tolstojan intercrater plains, and later in "Tolstojan and Calorian smooth plains units"?

Comment: Sorry, the nomination has been delayed by a few hours. I hope it will be accepted

Created/expanded by Dr. Blofeld (talk), Nvvchar (talk), Rosiestep (talk). Nominated by Nvvchar (talk) at 18:57, 7 October 2012 (UTC)

Hook is too long at 253 characters ... and is difficult to parse. Sasata (talk) 09:00, 8 October 2012 (UTC)

How about Alt 1... that Pre-Tolstojan refers to the oldest period in the history of planet Mercury (pictured) from its moment of formation? --Nvvchar. 12:36, 8 October 2012 (UTC)

Article is long and new enough; ALT1 is short enough (and comprehensible); and I've verified the hook fact online. Paraphrasing from sources is adequate. Sasata (talk) 17:47, 8 October 2012 (UTC)