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- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by The Squirrel Conspiracy (talk) 20:10, 1 August 2020 (UTC)
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Pradhan Mantri Garib Kalyan Anna Yojana
... that the Pradhan Mantri Garib Kalyan Anna Yojana, launched during COVID-19 pandemic in India is the largest food security scheme in the world?Source: "PM Modi extends Pradhan Mantri Garib Kalyan Anna Yojana till Diwali, Chhath, end of November - The Financial Express". Retrieved 2020-07-04.- ALT1:
... that the scale of Pradhan Mantri Garib Kalyan Anna Yojana, a food security scheme of India, is equal to feeding 2.5 times the US, 12 times the UK, and twice the European Union’s population?Source: "PM Modi extends Pradhan Mantri Garib Kalyan Anna Yojana till Diwali, Chhath, end of November - The Financial Express". Retrieved 2020-07-04.
- ALT1:
Created by Santoshdts (talk). Self-nominated at 08:27, 5 July 2020 (UTC).
- I think there is some confusion here. The following are all currently separate articles. Even the bold text in both of your hooks link to different articles.
- Pradhan Mantri Garib Kalyan Yojana
- Pradhan Mantri Garib Kalyan Anna Yojana
Garib Kalyan Rojgar Abhiyaan
- Please check. DTM (talk) 09:52, 5 July 2020 (UTC)
- Thank you @DiplomatTesterMan: for pointing out the error. Auto-correct on my iPad did the trick and even I didn't notice it. I have corrected the title now. Hope this is good. Thanks again. Santoshdts [TalkToMe] 10:03, 5 July 2020 (UTC)
- @DiplomatTesterMan: Why is the page name in Hindi instead of English? This is the English Wikipedia after all. Yoninah (talk) 14:08, 28 July 2020 (UTC)
- Yoninah, Please have a look at Template:Government Schemes in India. Are you suggesting we change all the names to English? Doable over time. DTM (talk) 14:24, 28 July 2020 (UTC)
- @Yoninah:I've made some minor alterations to the hooks, hope these are more relevant to international readers:
- ALT2:
... that the food security scheme of India, launched during the COVID-19 pandemic, is the largest in the world?Source: "PM Modi extends Pradhan Mantri Garib Kalyan Anna Yojana till Diwali, Chhath, end of November - The Financial Express". Retrieved 2020-07-04. - ALT2a:
... that the scale of India's food security scheme, launched during the COVID-19 pandemic, is equal to feeding 2.5 times the US, 12 times the UK, and twice the European Union population?Source: "PM Modi extends Pradhan Mantri Garib Kalyan Anna Yojana till Diwali, Chhath, end of November - The Financial Express". Retrieved 2020-07-04. Santoshdts [TalkToMe] 18:46, 28 July 2020 (UTC)
- The ALTs are great, thanks. I tweaked the language a bit and prefer ALT2a. Review to come. Yoninah (talk) 18:51, 28 July 2020 (UTC)
- New enough, long enough, neutrally written, well referenced, no close paraphrasing seen. I have added "clarification needed" tags to the article where you're using the word
crore
; please write these figures in English terms. I have also added a "citation needed" tag to the claim that it is the largest in the world. If you don't have a solid reference for that, you could just writeone of the largest in the world
, but it still needs a cite. - ALT2a looks like the most interesting hook because it provides some details. I would suggest writing it like this:
- ALT2b: ... that India's 2020 food security scheme, launched during the COVID-19 pandemic, is equal to feeding 2.5 times the population of the US, 12 times that of the UK, and twice that of the European Union?
- No QPQ needed for nominator with less than 5 DYK credits. Yoninah (talk) 19:09, 28 July 2020 (UTC)
- Thank you Yoninah for reviewing the article and DYK nomination. I have edited the article and have cleared the maintanance tags placed. The ALT2b suggestion looks much better and interesting. Thanks again. Santoshdts [TalkToMe] 19:25, 29 July 2020 (UTC)
- New enough, long enough, neutrally written, well referenced, no close paraphrasing seen. I have added "clarification needed" tags to the article where you're using the word
- ALT2: