Template:Did you know nominations/Power of the Primes

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:36, 8 April 2018 (UTC)

Power of the Primes

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Logo of the toyline

... that in preparation for the Transformers toyline Power of the Primes, Hasbro created a poll allowing fans to choose the next character to become a Prime? Source: The poll
- ALT1:... that after Hasbro created a fan poll for the Transformers toyline Power of the Primes, Optimus Primal was chosen to become the next Prime? Source: Poll results
- ALT2:... that the figure of Jazz from the Transformers toyline Power of the Primes ~~caused~~ drew controversy because the text on its sticker, when translated from Cybertronian, spelled out Make America Great Again? Source: Controversy)

Reviewed: Florence (video game)

Moved to mainspace by PanagiotisZois (talk). Self-nominated at 21:34, 2 March 2018 (UTC).

Article is on schedule, long, paraphrased, neutral, reliably sourced and verified. However, I caught some minor typos as well as grammar issues in the prose: "announcemet", "helf", "was confirmed to return" → "to have returned", "The poll about a month later on February 18 with Optimus Primal being chosen to become the next Prime." → needs c/e for clarity, "Dinobots; → change semicolon to colon. Logo is licensed, and all hooks are cited, but I think ALT2 is the most interesting; however, its length clocks at 244 chars., which fails the 200-character limit, so please try shortening it. Finally, you are required to do a QPQ since you have had five DYK creds under your belt. Slightlymad 03:34, 19 March 2018 (UTC)

Thank you. Will do. PanagiotisZois (talk) 19:13, 19 March 2018 (UTC)

It took some effort but... "mod ALT2:... that Jazz's figure from the Transformers toyline Power of the Primes drew controversy due to text on its sticker spelling out Make America Great Again?"

Now that the issues have been resolved, and a QPQ (which you forgot to add in this DYK) has been performed, the modified ALT2 hook should be good to go. Slightlymad 03:33, 20 March 2018 (UTC)