Template:Did you know nominations/Portrait of Vincent Nubiola
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The result was: promoted by Crisco 1492 (talk) 15:19, 28 September 2011 (UTC)
Portrait of Vincent Nubiola
[edit]- ... that Miró started art classes after a nervous breakdown where he met and painted Vincent Nubila in a style that resembled Van Gogh's?
- Comment: no image available as painting is in copyright. Look for "nervous" and "gogh" to find the two refs that apply to this hook.
Created/expanded by Kippelboy (talk). Nominated by Victuallers (talk) at 23:08, 21 September 2011 (UTC)
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- "Miró painted the work during April 1917 and shortly after, it was part of one of his first exhibitions at the Galeria Dalmau in Barcelona." is uncited (one whole paragraph). Ref 6 needs better formatting, although all references could use some clean-up. Crisco 1492 (talk) 12:19, 27 September 2011 (UTC)
- Fixed Victuallers (talk) 22:52, 27 September 2011 (UTC)
- (alt more hooky?) ... that Miró started art classes after a nervous breakdown where he met and painted his friend Vincent in a style that resembled Van Gogh's?
- Makes a point of "Vincent" near "van Gogh" Victuallers (talk) 22:57, 27 September 2011 (UTC)
- ALT is nice. I'd still rather have a citation for the date it was first displayed, as that could prove controversial. Crisco 1492 (talk) 23:54, 27 September 2011 (UTC)
- Fixed again. I think this is excesssive as I cannot believe this would be controversial but I'll respect your views Victuallers (talk) 10:10, 28 September 2011 (UTC)
- ALT is nice. I'd still rather have a citation for the date it was first displayed, as that could prove controversial. Crisco 1492 (talk) 23:54, 27 September 2011 (UTC)
- Makes a point of "Vincent" near "van Gogh" Victuallers (talk) 22:57, 27 September 2011 (UTC)
- ALT1 good to go! Crisco 1492 (talk) 11:08, 28 September 2011 (UTC)