Template:Did you know nominations/Por Amarte Así
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The result was: promoted by PFHLai (talk) 01:45, 18 January 2014 (UTC)
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Por Amarte Así
[edit]- ... that Alejandro Montalbán and Eduardo Reyes received an ASCAP Award for a pop, salsa, and duranguense recording of "Por Amarte Así"?
5x expanded by Magiciandude (talk). Self nominated at 21:49, 15 December 2013 (UTC).
Long enough, new enough. No copyvios found. QPQ has been done. Hook is short enough at 135 characters but it certainly isn't sourced - Montalban and Reyes received an ASCAP award in the Pop/Ballad category once and in the Latin category twice. Please fix.--Launchballer 22:56, 4 January 2014 (UTC)
- The Pop/Ballad category was the ASCAP Latin awards, unless I'm missing something here? I changed the hook a bit. Erick (talk) 23:03, 4 January 2014 (UTC)
- Still unacceptable. The hook adjustment needs to appear as a ALT hook. I've changed the original hook back to what it was and the hook you've just changed the hook to is below:
- ALT1: ... that Alejandro Montalbán and Eduardo Reyes received an ASCAP Award for a pop, salsa, and duranguense recording of "Por Amarte Así"?
- I was thinking something more along the lines of
- ALT2: ... that Alejandro Montalbán and Eduardo Reyes received an ASCAP Latin Award for a pop, salsa, and Regional Mexican recording of "Por Amarte Así"?--Launchballer 23:35, 4 January 2014 (UTC)
- Still unacceptable. The hook adjustment needs to appear as a ALT hook. I've changed the original hook back to what it was and the hook you've just changed the hook to is below:
Alright looks good. Erick (talk) 23:47, 4 January 2014 (UTC)
All we need now is another reviewer to review the new hook, as it was proposed by me, and we're done here.--Launchballer 23:55, 4 January 2014 (UTC)
- I might approve ALT1 if duranguense was linked, and ALT2 if regional was not capitalized. Actually I think you didn't need a new reviewer because it was only different wording of the same thing, but you asked. I suggest you consider moving the article more to the front of the hook if you want clicks for it, and think again about mentioning long names of people readers may not know. My (too simple?) suggestion would be
- ALT3: ... that the pop, salsa, and duranguense recording of "Por Amarte Así won an ASCAP Award?
- --Gerda Arendt (talk) 11:31, 17 January 2014 (UTC)
- Have another look at the 'decoration' (for want of a better word) around Por Amarte Asi and you will see why I am not willing to accept ALT3. How about
- ALT4: ... that "Por Amarte Así", a pop, salsa, and duranguense recording, won Alejandro Montalbán and Eduardo Reyes an ASCAP Latin award in its Pop/Ballad, Salsa and Duranguense categories?
- I'm still not convinced that Duranguense means the same as Regional Mexican, though.--Launchballer 13:39, 17 January 2014 (UTC)
- ALT5: ... that "Por Amarte Así" won an ASCAP Latin award in categories Pop/Ballad, Salsa and Duranguense for Alejandro Montalbán and Eduardo Reyes? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 13:50, 17 January 2014 (UTC)
