Template:Did you know nominations/Pope Anastasius II
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The result was: promoted by Hawkeye7 (talk) 23:31, 10 March 2013 (UTC).
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Pope Anastasius II
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- ... that Pope Anastasius II (pictured) was sent to the sixth circle of hell as a result of mistaken identity?
- Reviewed: Valor por Tamaulipas
- Comment: 5x expansion (691 characters earlier today, 3771 now)
5x expanded by AbstractIllusions (talk). Self nominated at 19:55, 8 March 2013 (UTC).
I believe you must revise the hook to "was sent to hell in Dante's Inferno" or something of that sort. It is generally good to know who considered him to be sent to hell. After all, we have no proof that he actually did. Proudbolsahye (talk) 21:06, 8 March 2013 (UTC)
- Shnorhakalut’yun (thank you) for the suggestion. I changed the hook to read "the sixth circle of hell"--a clear nod to Dante's literary articulation of hell and not any other conception. I think that maximizes hookiness, accuracy, and precision appropriately. AbstractIllusions (talk) 13:31, 9 March 2013 (UTC)
Now that the hook is more comprehensible. Expanded enough. This article is good to go! Proudbolsahye (talk) 22:05, 9 March 2013 (UTC)
