Template:Did you know nominations/Pneuma: Breath of Life
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: rejected by sst✈(discuss) 19:24, 20 November 2015 (UTC)
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Pneuma: Breath of Life
[edit]- ... that Pneuma: Breath of Life was created to test "physically based rendering" in Unreal Engine 4?
Created/expanded by Justinwortham (talk). Nominated by Kiyoshiendo (talk) at 16:04, 3 November 2015 (UTC).
- Unfortunately, the article isn't very long (150 words), and the hook is not backed up by an inline citation. Going deeper, in my opinion, I'm not sure this article is ready for prime-time, let alone a DYK nomination. Most of the sources in the article appear to be primary and promotional sourcing. Most of the article appears to be an advertisement, with little or no information on the development of the game or any critical commentary outside of a link to Metacritic (about the only non-promotional source used). After a rewrite to improve the article's quality, this might be appropriate. --McDoobAU93 16:31, 3 November 2015 (UTC)
- Thank you regardless. I'm sure somebody will write it some time. --Kiyoshiendo (talk) 16:34, 3 November 2015 (UTC)
Article, at 775 prose characters, is way too short for DYK, and there has been no expansion attempted over the past couple of weeks. Marking for closure as unsuccessful. BlueMoonset (talk) 00:13, 20 November 2015 (UTC)
