Template:Did you know nominations/Play (concert residency)

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The result was: promoted by Coolperson177 (talk) 17:45, 6 January 2022 (UTC)

Play (concert residency)

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• ... that Katy Perry's residency Play sold out on its opening night? Source: https://www.billboard.com/music/pop/katy-perry-las-vegas-residency-play-resorts-world-1235014798/
  • ALT1: ... that Play is Katy Perry's first residency show? Source: https://www.yahoo.com/now/katy-perry-sings-next-giant-194258640.html
  • Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/The Romans (Doctor Who)

Created by SNUGGUMS (talk), expanded by SNUGGUMS (talk) and Loibird90 (talk). Nominated by SNUGGUMS (talk) at 18:17, 1 January 2022 (UTC).

• Comments by Tbhotch

General eligibility:

• New enough:
• Long enough:
• Other problems:

Policy compliance:

• Adequate sourcing:
• Neutral:
• Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:
• Other problems:

Hook eligibility:

• Cited:
• Interesting:
• Other problems:

QPQ: Done.

Overall: I'm not opposed to the hooks but I find "Katy Perry sings next to a giant face mask and inside a toilet in Vegas residency" and "she mentioned that (her favorite) 1990s movies such as Honey, I Shrunk the Kids, Pee-wee's Playhouse, and Pee-wee's Big Adventure influenced the show's creation" hookier than the current options. Beyond that, the article falls within DYK policy. (CC) Tbhotch^™ 02:31, 3 January 2022 (UTC)

In that case, Tbhotch, tell me how this works as ALT2: ... that Play features Katy Perry interacting with a giant toilet and a giant face mask? (Source: https://www.yahoo.com/now/katy-perry-sings-next-giant-194258640.html) Maybe someone could change it to past tense, but I couldn't think of a good way to include the show influences as a hook. SNUGGUMS (talk / edits) 04:04, 3 January 2022 (UTC)

As I've had delayed DYKs due to the WP:DYKCRIT #3, I would highly suggest you to incorporate it as it is written, for example, in the lead. (CC) Tbhotch^™ 05:11, 3 January 2022 (UTC)

While support for the hook can be found under "Critical response", I've added some text to the lead accordingly as backup. SNUGGUMS (talk / edits) 05:23, 3 January 2022 (UTC)

ALT2 is good to go. (CC) Tbhotch^™ 19:07, 3 January 2022 (UTC)

• To Prep 7. — Coolperson177 (t|c) 17:45, 6 January 2022 (UTC)