Template:Did you know nominations/Photo Bits

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The result was: promoted by Miyagawa (talk) 23:02, 3 February 2012 (UTC)

Photo Bits

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• ... that Photo Bits, a British soft porn magazine published from 1898 to 1914, was the first pin-up magazine in the United Kingdom?

Expanded by --SupernovaExplosion (talk) 07:44, 1 February 2012 (UTC)). Nominated by SupernovaExplosion (talk) at 07:40, 1 February 2012 (UTC)

Long enough (expanded from 487 characters to 1679) and "new" enough as the expansion occurred on Feb 1 - however the expansion isn't quite five fold as required by the qualifications for newness, but between three and four fold, so should be expanded by another 756 characters (roughly 150 words) to qualify. Might help readability if it were broken up into smaller paragraphs. Otherwise the article is within policy and the hook is well sourced and interesting. Vale of Glamorgan (talk) 19:51, 1 February 2012 (UTC)

Before I expanded, the article was in this form (193 characters). I expanded it from 193 characters to 1657 characters which is 8.5 times expansion. I have broken up into smaller paragraphs, thanks. --SupernovaExplosion (talk) 06:12, 2 February 2012 (UTC)

OK, good to go. Vale of Glamorgan (talk) 14:18, 2 February 2012 (UTC)