Template:Did you know nominations/Phoenix freeway shootings
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 20:35, 15 October 2015 (UTC)
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Phoenix freeway shootings
[edit]... that between August 27 and September 10, there were at least eleven shootings at vehicles traveling along Interstate 10 and State Route 202 in Phoenix, Arizona?
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Vosoritide
- Comment: This hook may change depending on what happens before it is posted, so I will keep the page updated until it is reviewed
Created by Ktr101 (talk). Self-nominated at 02:43, 14 September 2015 (UTC).
@Ktr101: This article is new enough and long enough. The article is neutral and does not contain close paraphrasing. The hook fact has several inline citations but is not correct. Of the eleven incidents, only eight were shootings and in the other three, different projectiles were used, so we need another hook. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:20, 10 October 2015 (UTC)
- This should work instead: ALT1 ... that between August 27 and September 10, there were at least eleven incidents where vehicles traveling along Interstate 10 and State Route 202 in Phoenix, Arizona were shot at with projectiles or bullets?
Going with ALT1 which agrees with the article and source. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 19:59, 15 October 2015 (UTC)
