Template:Did you know nominations/Phil Eatherton
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The result was: promoted by BlueMoonset (talk) 20:00, 12 September 2012 (UTC)
Phil Eatherton
[edit]- ... that volleyball player Phil Eatherton set three career records at Ball State University?
- Reviewed: Achmat Hassiem
Created/expanded by PM800 (talk). Self nom at 21:55, 28 August 2012 (UTC)
Length, history and reference verified. But you're missing an even better hook which is in your main source:
- ALT1: ... that U.S. volleyball player Phil Eatherton set three career records at Ball State University and made it to the "Showcase Showdown" on The Price is Right? Daniel Case (talk) 15:46, 11 September 2012 (UTC)
- Note: confirming that the new fact in ALT1 is indeed in the article, and also in the inline source placed at the end of the sentence in question. BlueMoonset (talk) 04:11, 12 September 2012 (UTC)
- ALT1: ... that U.S. volleyball player Phil Eatherton set three career records at Ball State University and made it to the "Showcase Showdown" on The Price is Right? Daniel Case (talk) 15:46, 11 September 2012 (UTC)
