Template:Did you know nominations/Organic Cocoa Production and Export Cooperative
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by JuniperChill talk 19:34, 22 October 2024 (UTC)
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Organic Cocoa Production and Export Cooperative
- ... that the largest chocolate factory in São Tomé and Príncipe cost over 464,000 euros to build?
- Source: Sebastião, Sita (21 July 2022). "São Tomé inaugura terceira fábrica de chocolate e vai apostar na exportação" [São Tomé opens third chocolate factory and will focus on exports]. Forbes África Lusófona (in European Portuguese). Retrieved 30 September 2024. English source: "São Tomé: New organic chocolate factory to put profits into local community". Macau Business. 21 July 2022. Retrieved 30 September 2024.
- ALT1: ... that the Organic Cocoa Production and Export Cooperative built a chocolate factory on São Tomé Island that cost over 464,000 euros? Source: Same as ALT0.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Yuan Shikai coinage
- Comment: ALT1 is more direct with the article title.
Yue🌙 08:36, 30 September 2024 (UTC).
Everything looks good in terms of meeting the criteria for DYK but the hooks are lackluster (€464,000 isn't that fascinating a sum for a major chocolate factory). I recommend you look to a different aspect of the topic for the hook. ~ Pbritti (talk) 03:41, 1 October 2024 (UTC)
- @Pbritti: How about:
- ALT2: ... that in 2018 thieves stole 40 percent of the cocoa produced by the São Toméan Organic Cocoa Production and Export Cooperative?
- Source: Carlos, Maximino (23 May 2018). "São Tomé e Príncipe : Economia do cacau prejudicada" [São Tomé and Príncipe: Cocoa Economy Damaged]. Radio France Internationale (in Portuguese). Retrieved 30 September 2024.
- ALT3: ... that the São Toméan Organic Cocoa Production and Export Cooperative claims to represent 3,000 farmers from 42 smallholders' associations?
- Source: "Actividades e Realizações" [Activities and Achievements]. CECAB-STP. Organic Cocoa Production and Export Cooperative. Retrieved 30 September 2024.
- Yue🌙 04:51, 1 October 2024 (UTC)
- @Pbritti: How about:
