Template:Did you know nominations/Op. 120, No. 1 (Berio)

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The result was: promoted by Panyd^{The muffin is not subtle} 16:38, 10 May 2015 (UTC)

Op. 120, No. 1 (Berio)

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... that Op. 120, No. 1 refers to a clarinet sonata by Brahms which Luciano Berio arranged as a clarinet concerto for the Los Angeles Philharmonic?

Reviewed: Julia Gjika

Created by Wildbill hitchcock (talk). Nominated by Gerda Arendt (talk) at 10:07, 31 March 2015 (UTC).

This looks mostly fine to me. New enough and long enough, well-written and laid out, and the article is reliably sourced. However, the key hook fact - that the piece is "arrangement for clarinet and orchestra of Johannes Brahms's Clarinet Sonata Op. 120, No. 1 by Italian composer Luciano Berio", to quote the lead - does not appear to be sourced. This needs to be fixed before I can approve this hook. Prioryman (talk) 11:22, 8 May 2015 (UTC)

It is sourced now in the lead. Author: the lead should be a summary of sourced info from the body. Please do that formatting, - copy from lead to body with the references. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 11:36, 8 May 2015 (UTC)

@Ron Oliver: - please see above. Prioryman (talk) 11:45, 8 May 2015 (UTC)

Just copied the lead. Let me know if something else needs to be changed. Ron Oliver (talk) 13:23, 8 May 2015 (UTC)

That's fine, thanks. We're good to go. Prioryman (talk) 19:14, 8 May 2015 (UTC)