Template:Did you know nominations/One Voice Children's Choir

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The result was: promoted by The Squirrel Conspiracy (talk) 22:13, 5 December 2015 (UTC)

One Voice Children's Choir

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• ... that the 140-member One Voice Children's Choir, which reached the quarterfinals of America's Got Talent in 2014, has a waiting list of 250 children wanting to join?

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Created by Cunard (talk). Self-nominated at 06:21, 9 November 2015 (UTC).

• Article is new, long enough, and within policy. Hook is cited, although I would propose that the hook be changed to:

ALT1: ... that America's Got Talent 2014 quarterfinalist One Voice Children's Choir has a waiting list of 250 children wanting to join as of January 2015?

--carlojoseph14 (talk) 08:40, 2 December 2015 (UTC)

Thank you for the review, Carlojoseph14 (talk · contribs)! I prefer your alternative hook, which is a good copyedit of my hook, making it more concise and precise. Cunard (talk) 05:32, 3 December 2015 (UTC)

ALT1 hook short enough, interesting, neutral, and verified to online citation provided. Rest of review per Carlojoseph14. sst✈^(discuss) 10:39, 5 December 2015 (UTC)