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The result was: promoted by Cielquiparle (talk) 11:56, 26 March 2023 (UTC)

Omar (opera)

Created by MelanieN (talk). Self-nominated at 18:03, 4 March 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Omar (opera); consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.

  • The target article in the hook is supposed to be in bold font. Schwede66 01:23, 5 March 2023 (UTC)
    Thanks. Fixed. -- MelanieN (talk) 03:57, 5 March 2023 (UTC)


General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems

Hook eligibility:

  • Cited: No - Not quite. "Sold into slavery" implies this was the place he became a slave, where actually the source just says "sold", since he was already a slave.
  • Interesting: Yes
QPQ: Done.

Overall: Easily fixed; I recommend just "sold as a slave", but there might be other alternatives. More importantly, I strongly recommend to only propose one hook for this basic phrasing, not four with very minor variations - I had to read and reread them just to see what the differences were! Out of those I prefer "about","less than a mile", and "the site where". You may even consider "premiered" for shortitudineosity - though honestly, it's all much the same. GRuban (talk) 14:46, 21 March 2023 (UTC)

GRuban, thank you very much for your helpful comments. Yes, I do see now that the reference says “sold as a slave” rather than “sold into slavery”; he had already been sold into slavery in Africa. I will take your suggestions for "about" (rather than "based on the life of") and leaving out "market" for brevity. I will retain "had its world premiere" rather than just "premiered" because I think it is clearer. That leave us with
*ALT5 … ... that the opera Omar, about Muslim scholar Omar ibn Said, had its world premiere in a theater located less than a mile from the site where he was sold as a slave?
That gets the main points across, including what I hope is perceived as a shocker, that a scholar was sold as a slave. And is well under 200 characters. Thanks again. .-- MelanieN (talk) 16:09, 23 March 2023 (UTC)
Approve ALT5, good show. --GRuban (talk) 17:11, 23 March 2023 (UTC)