Template:Did you know nominations/Nilüfer Verdi
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The result was: promoted by SL93 (talk) 21:41, 5 February 2021 (UTC)
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Nilüfer Verdi
... that Nilüfer Verdi is considered as the first female jazz pianist of Turkey?Source: "Türkiye’nin ilk kadın caz piyanisti olarak anılan Nilüfer Verdi ..." (in Turkish) [1]
- Reviewed: Uniterm
Created by CeeGee (talk). Self-nominated at 17:23, 18 January 2021 (UTC).
Much of this article checks out, but there are a multitude of grammar and (minor) spelling errors that make it look like a mechanical translation. Also "considered...the first female jazz pianist" is likely an artifact of the same, as either she is the first or she isn't - it's an objective matter, not subjective. This needs a copyedit pass before it can be considered for the front page. - The Bushranger One ping only 02:41, 19 January 2021 (UTC)
- Thanks for your efforts. Requested copyediting. by the Guild CeeGee 05:45, 19 January 2021 (UTC)
- Glad to help - ping me once it's done and I'll take a re-look!
- The Bushranger One ping only 06:08, 19 January 2021 (UTC)
- Glad to help - ping me once it's done and I'll take a re-look!
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... that Nilüfer Verdi is considered to be the first female jazz pianist in Turkey?CeeGee 07:09, 2 February 2021 (UTC)
- @CeeGee: Much better grammar-wise now. I'm still not sure about "considered to be" - would removing those words from the hook work (i.e. making it a definitive statement "is the first") or is there something in the Turkish language sources about that being uncertain? - The Bushranger One ping only 07:33, 2 February 2021 (UTC)
- She is "the first ..." according to sources. I thought "considered" might be more acceptable. CeeGee 16:59, 2 February 2021 (UTC)
- "Considered" makes it seem ambiguous, which is why I was concerned. The below works. Thanks for being patient about this! - The Bushranger One ping only 23:14, 2 February 2021 (UTC)
- "Considered" makes it seem ambiguous, which is why I was concerned. The below works. Thanks for being patient about this!
- ALT2 ... that Nilüfer Verdi is the first female jazz pianist in Turkey? CeeGee 16:59, 2 February 2021 (UTC)
Good to go. - The Bushranger One ping only 23:14, 2 February 2021 (UTC)
