Template:Did you know nominations/Nikisha Fogo
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- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 12:54, 15 June 2020 (UTC)
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Nikisha Fogo
- ... that Swedish ballerina Nikisha Fogo's parents owned and ran the first hip-hop dance school in Sweden?[1]
- ALT1:... that Swedish ballerina Nikisha Fogo became a first soloist of Vienna State Ballet after performing her first full-length lead role in Sylvia? [2]
Created by Corachow (talk). Self-nominated at 15:45, 5 June 2020 (UTC).
General: Article is new enough and long enough |
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Overall: I like ALT0 and it is good to go, but it's currently close to the source which reads "Fogo's parents opened Sweden's first hip-hop dance school" so would suggest changing to "opened" to owned or ran or something else. ALT1 needs minor adjustment since it's first soloist in the article and source not First Soloist, Ballerina should be ballerina and for "performing the title role Sylvia, her first full-length lead role?" i suggest "performing her first full-length lead role in Sylvia?" Mujinga (talk) 15:32, 6 June 2020 (UTC)