Template:Did you know nominations/New Body
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 12:07, 23 January 2020 (UTC)
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New Body
- ... that Kanye West cut the song "New Body" because Nicki Minaj couldn't make her verse about body-shaming religious? [1]
- ALT1:... that Kanye West's "New Body", a song about body-shaming, was reworked to be "more chaste and respectful"? Source: [2]
- ALT2:... that Kanye West promoted his song "New Body" for a year before cutting it from his album Jesus Is King days before its release?
- ALT3:... that Kanye West removed the song "New Body" from his album Jesus Is King just a day before its release?
- ALT4:... that Kanye West cut the song "New Body" from Jesus Is King because Nicki Minaj didn't want to make a religious verse about body-shaming?
Created by Nice4What (talk). Self-nominated at 13:17, 15 December 2019 (UTC).
Article is well-written and sourced, new enough. Hooks are sourced and present, however I have merged the original hook and ALT3 into ALT4 to suggest to the reader that Kanye intended on making a religion-centred album. Also, to defend Nicki, in the Complex article she clearly indicates that she "didn't" want to make the verse religious rather than "couldn't". I'm not entirely sure if my hook makes any sense towards the end, so I would like a second opinion. heyitsben!! talk 12:34, 23 December 2019 (UTC)
The original reviewer requested a second opinion (personally I think ALT3 is interesting on its own, probably more quirky than ALT4), so this nomination might need new eyes. Courtesy ping to the nominator Nice4What and requesting their input on HeyitsBen's ALT4 proposal. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 04:06, 13 January 2020 (UTC)
- @Narutolovehinata5: ALT 4 is fine and is a revamped wording of the original blurb proposal. I could understand how ALT 3 might be more interesting though. Nice4What (talk · contribs) – (Don't forget to share a Thanks ♥) 11:48, 13 January 2020 (UTC)
@Nice4What: Hook review, second opinion. I prefer ALT3, short and interesting. Thanks, Zeete (talk) 15:35, 22 January 2020 (UTC)
- Hi, I came by to promote ALT3, but the article doesn't say anything about Kanye West being the one who pulled it; it just says it was pulled. Yoninah (talk) 22:39, 22 January 2020 (UTC)
- @Yoninah: West is known to have creative control over his own track lists as an A-list star. However, if it must be reworded, I could suggest "... that the song "New Body" was removed from Kanye West's album Jesus Is King just a day before its release?" Nice4What (talk · contribs) – (Don't forget to share a Thanks ♥) 02:59, 23 January 2020 (UTC)