Template:Did you know nominations/Neuer Marstall

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The result was: promoted by Miyagawa (talk) 10:02, 3 March 2012 (UTC)

Neuer Marstall

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... that the New Stables (pictured), a building complex in central Berlin, Germany that had housed the Imperial horses and carriages, later housed revolutionaries in the Christmas Crisis of 1918?

Created/expanded by Ultracobalt (talk). Self nom at 21:51, 27 February 2012 (UTC)

D1/H5: No inline citations directly after one of the hook facts (i.e.: that the stables once housed the Imperial horses). D2:"Current Use" section is uncited. H2/Q1: Hook is 204 characters long, above the 200 character limit. These need to be addressed. Seems O.K. otherwise, but this is my first review. Sincerely, SamBlob (talk) 14:02, 29 February 2012 (UTC)
ALT: ... that the New Stables (pictured), a building complex in central Berlin, Germany that had housed the Imperial horses and carriages, later housed revolutionaries in the Christmas Crisis of 1918? Sincerely, SamBlob (talk) 14:02, 29 February 2012 (UTC)
Thanks for review. New hook is good. I realized I had 2 refs listed as "literature" and "external link", moved those into the right INLINE spots and added another. Tightened up the text, rechecked links, did some formatting. --Ultracobalt (talk) 09:49, 1 March 2012 (UTC)

I replaced the original hook with the Alt accepted by nom.

new enough, long enough, no image issues. Offline and foreign language citations accepted in good faith.--Ishtar456 (talk) 21:06, 2 March 2012 (UTC)