Template:Did you know nominations/Nelson's kangaroo rat
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Hawkeye7 (talk) 20:46, 2 September 2014 (UTC)
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Nelson's kangaroo rat
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- ... that Nelson's kangaroo rat lives in a complex burrow which sometimes includes tunnels dug through the subsurface rock?
- Reviewed: Mostafa Salameh
5x expanded by Cwmhiraeth (talk). Self nominated at 09:26, 30 August 2014 (UTC).
Significantly expanded (amply so!) within the last seven days, long enough, is within policy (neutral and properly referenced, no close paraphrasing etc.). QPQ OK. I made some small fixes to improve accuracy. However, I think the hook still needs a slight modification to be accurate — "through" the subsurface rock rather than "into". Also the article needs a similar fix. Otherwise, fine work! Micromesistius (talk) 20:02, 30 August 2014 (UTC)
- I don't mind making the change you suggest to hook and article but I envision these tunnels as being blind alleys rather than being through highways so think the current phrasing is better. What do you think? Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:12, 31 August 2014 (UTC)
- My interpretation is that there is a hard layer of subsurface rock, then some softer rock/sediment where the tunnels continued, out of reach of the collector. However, the source is a bit ambiguous in this regard. Micromesistius (talk) 08:12, 31 August 2014 (UTC)
- I'll make the changes. I am really appreciating having access to JSTOR. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 08:40, 31 August 2014 (UTC)
Thanks, good to go now! Micromesistius (talk) 20:58, 31 August 2014 (UTC)
- I'll make the changes. I am really appreciating having access to JSTOR. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 08:40, 31 August 2014 (UTC)
- My interpretation is that there is a hard layer of subsurface rock, then some softer rock/sediment where the tunnels continued, out of reach of the collector. However, the source is a bit ambiguous in this regard. Micromesistius (talk) 08:12, 31 August 2014 (UTC)
- I don't mind making the change you suggest to hook and article but I envision these tunnels as being blind alleys rather than being through highways so think the current phrasing is better. What do you think? Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:12, 31 August 2014 (UTC)
