Template:Did you know nominations/Neil Etheridge
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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 22:12, 2 December 2018 (UTC)
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Neil Etheridge
[edit]- ... that footballer Neil Etheridge was the first Filipino and first Southeast Asian to play in the Premier League? Source: ESPN
- Reviewed: Chevy Commons
Improved to Good Article status by Kosack (talk). Self-nominated at 13:10, 29 October 2018 (UTC).
Will be claiming this review. Full review to follow in the next few days. Just a suggestion though: he was not only the first Filipino in the Premier League but also the first Southeast Asian, so that might work as an alternate hook. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 12:58, 30 October 2018 (UTC)
- Yeah I chose to avoid the Southeast Asia angle as it seems like a pretty general area rather than a definitive thing like the nationality and readers were probably more likely to know Filipino more than what Southeast Asia consists of. Thoughts? Kosack (talk) 13:03, 30 October 2018 (UTC)
- Southeast Asia is a well-defined area though. How about something like "that British-Filipino footballer..." or "Etheridge is the first Filipino and the first Southeast Asian..." or wording to that effect? Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 13:09, 30 October 2018 (UTC)
Thanks. Here's the full review: it was promoted to GA status on time, the article is of an appropriate length, and is adequately sourced. I was unable to find any copyright violations or close paraphrasing. The hook is verified, cited inline, and is interesting. A QPQ has been provided. Good to go. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 16:03, 4 November 2018 (UTC)
