Template:Did you know nominations/Ned Garvin

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The result was: promoted by Ashorocetus (talk | contribs) 13:54, 1 April 2016 (UTC)

Ned Garvin

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~~... that baseball pitcher Ned Garvin lost his job and was fined US$100 after shooting a bar owner in 1902?~~

Reviewed: Doris Mackinnon

5x expanded by EricEnfermero (talk). Self-nominated at 06:20, 25 March 2016 (UTC).

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: Interesting:

QPQ: - Not done
Overall: All good, just waiting for the QPQ Makeandtoss (talk) 21:31, 25 March 2016 (UTC)

Good to go. Makeandtoss (talk) 08:39, 26 March 2016 (UTC)

Is this pic on the right good for use on DYK? --PFHLai (talk) 12:47, 26 March 2016 (UTC)

Yes but I guess since it is public domain, you are allowed to improve it. Suggestions include removing the surrounding frame and resizing the portrait. Makeandtoss (talk) 13:02, 26 March 2016 (UTC)

Thanks for looking into the pic. I don't quite have the skills to edit/resize it, and I wasn't sure how it would render at DYK size, but it's always nice to have a pic for a DYK if someone is up to editing it. EricEnfermero (Talk) 06:38, 28 March 2016 (UTC)

Ned Garvin

For use on MainPage in early April, at the start of the upcoming baseball season:

ALT1 : ... that pitcher Ned Garvin (pictured) was fined US$100 and let go by the Chicago White Stockings in 1902 after he shot a bar owner and pistol-whipped a policeman?
ALT2 : ... that pitcher Ned Garvin (pictured) was released by the Chicago White Stockings during the 1902 baseball season for the protection of the other players on his team?

--PFHLai (talk) 19:57, 28 March 2016 (UTC)

I prefer PHFLai's alts, especially ALT2, for the lead slot on April 3, the opening of the 2016 Major League Baseball season. Both hooks are verified and cited inline. Image (use the one without the border) is public domain. Rest of review per Makeandtoss. Yoninah (talk) 22:20, 29 March 2016 (UTC)