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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:35, 7 October 2017 (UTC)

Nakhl Gardani

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Nakhl Gardani ritual in Iran
Nakhl Gardani ritual in Iran

Created by Mhhossein (talk). Self-nominated at 14:18, 27 September 2017 (UTC).

  • Nice work! My review -
General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: Done.

Overall: Article is just about long enough - a few prose issues in here but those should be easily fixed. The hook here could be cited better but I think it should be covered by secondary sources already. (You also need to review someone else's nomination before this one can be passed.) — fox 18:33, 29 September 2017 (UTC)

@Fox: Hi, thanks for the review. See if your concerns are addressed. --Mhhossein talk 12:52, 2 October 2017 (UTC)
Nice! Looks good to me now. — fox 16:38, 2 October 2017 (UTC)